ne metal heads out there?

id really appreciate any constructive criticism and not just flames, but there almost inevitable in a situation like this

my first vocal cover

The Black Dahlia murder : The Blackest Incarnation

i only did 2nd half of the song to test things out

gaming mic + audacity w00t!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kf1Ok56YmH8




lyrics

For countless winter nights I have dreamt of such a day
I'd watch the humans crawl 'neath a swirling den of pain

The plight of all creation
The fall of their existence
Extinction, the will of humanity
Forsaken by my hand

Oh weep, the angels shall be destroyed
As claws remove their wings
Jaws sodden in the purest blood
In the purest fucking blood I bathe!

This blackened hand shall reap
Shall reap insurmountable
Undying, cleaving the sickly hearts of mortals true
Earth falls as heaven shall
Crumbing as god has taken knee and felt his creation's pain
The humans' fucking pain

Our lord has birthed the perfect evil unto this fragile earth
The sands of time now weigh against you
Pounding your weathered backs
Impending dread is cast upon you to swallow whole your faith
The boundaries of your mortality are the only remorse you'll be shown
I arrive unwritten to blacken the work of your lord
Your god so feeble, allowed for this end to be born
Your god so feeble, trampled 'neath my wrath

To die crushed beneath my fist
To fall as heaven shall

My purpose manifests, I am void of delusion
I am born into this wolven form in seek of human fucking flesh

Not bad man!! That's a pretty good band too, I have one of their albums. Are you strictly a vocalist or do you play any instruments? I've been playing the drums now for almost 20 years and I'm into technical metal / death metal. Very good exercise and stress relief!

Keep it up!

Where's synaptix and tada?

Wow, you've got a good voice man. For constructive criticism I would suggest you work on the timing. Felt like you were slightly behind at times. I think you'd come across as more aggressive by having a sense of attacking the lines. Then again, I imagine it's difficult doing just that when doing a voiceover.

You're not in any band?

ya, timing is my biggest problem

but i dont like people who skip over lines cuase they cant compensate there ovice for it, but what makes it hard, is alot of times in the studio they overlap highs and lows, and lines in general, so its hard to do it in real time but i still try lol..

me and some buddies had a band in high school, but then ppl moved away and such, but we are getting back together soon once a buddy moves back.

badinfluence wrote:Where's synaptix and tada?

on xfire?

The HL2DM-University needs a band, or at least a theme song!

".357 to your head
once you saw me now you're dead
AR2 is what you need
shoot your enemy and watch him bleed"

.....or not

"Combustion" by Meshuggah should be the U's theme song.

That tune is so awesome its crazy.

The drummer should be keeping solid time if they are any good at all, so just lock in to the basic time of the drummer.

Cynips wrote:

badinfluence wrote:Where's synaptix and tada?

on xfire?

Not on hl2dmu though. I miss NSF. : (

badinfluence wrote:

Cynips wrote:

badinfluence wrote:Where's synaptix and tada?

on xfire?

Not on hl2dmu though. I miss NSF. : (

Too bad we never really had time to take off.

man thats pretty severe i could remix it !

bahlk wrote: me and some buddies had a band in high school, but then ppl moved away and such.

omg bahlk is really Brian Adams... jimmy quti jody got married?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HJxvBWx9JFc

my 2nd cover

Suicide Silence - Unanswered

used my gaming mic + audacity

it just so happens this song is about god 2 lol......


ow much must I curse your name
And put your beliefs to shame
Before you prove yourself
And end this life?

End this life

And I'll say a fucking prayer
Because I know it
won't be answered

Where is your god? [2x]
Where is your fucking god?

And even though I
don't believe in you
I pray for the day [2x]
That you end this life

So please
Take Me
Away

I want the hand of god
To come and strike me down [2x]

Where is your god? [2x]
Where is your fucking god?

For all the prayers that go
unanswered [2x]
Why do you think that is?
For the families that
waste their time
Open your eyes

And all your prayers will go
Unanswered
Why do you think that is?
For the families that
waste their time
Open your fucking eyes

Nice man! i will not critic you cuz i can't do anything haha Just continue, you are good!

Wow, so much anti-God music out there. How about some Mortification - good 'ol Christian deathmetal. LOL, never thought I would say those two words one right after another!

bahlk said he will cover this song next: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kd5XGpHR ... re=related

eat my lead wrote:jimmy quti jody got married?

word filter ftw!

ne 1 here into vegetarian progressive grindcore?

best cover http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I2PzagXsD0Y

dbanimal wrote:Wow, so much anti-God music out there.

Can't accept anything else!



That pic is from the CD booklet in one of the albums by the norwegian deathmetal band ZYKLON

RAPEAGE FRUM HOMETOWN
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W5ciJcksiEU